One feedback

can you give one feedback to this news http://blog.onlinexcasinos.com/2008/...en-identified/ ?

for is it written well ?

what do you think ?

somebody ?

I assume that you're interested for translation purposes ???

The writing is clear, and communicates the story ...

But, it is a little simplistic in language structure (and loses interest) and there are areas where the words don't quite flow as naturally as they might.

Overall I'd say that it is written clearly and accurately - but somewhat dully.

I thought the writing was ok, but the content is gloomy and depressing. I don't think that anyone is going to want to really read whether or not a homicide occured outside a casino. True, that you could say the point of the story is to "play online at home it's safer", but I wouldn't go there.

If your blog is interesting your visitors and ranking will increase , but this is really boring news/article. IMO, you should write more interesting articles for your blog. :eyebrow:

It's good to have a blog to support your casino site.

I think the article is way too long, could be reduced by 60%. There is so much news to talk about that you don't need to get bogged down with long detailed posts about murders!

You could have written 5 shorter casino news related posts instead.