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    helpyou is offline Public Member
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    please you see the first article on http://blog.onlinexcasinos.com/

    It was written from one writer.

    I wish to know :

    does he write well in english ?


    I have ordered one review on intercasino.com :

    do you think that this is one good review of intercasino.com ? if no why ?

    What are the changes that you could do to article(review) ?

    what sentences are not helpfull ?
    Last edited by helpyou; 18 September 2007 at 9:12 am.
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    you can report on forum some sentences that you think that it is wrong.

    you don't worry if the comments is negative.
    Last edited by helpyou; 18 September 2007 at 12:06 pm.

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    yes I want to thank all your.
    I am very grate for your commnents.
    I repeat I am very grate.

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    I looked at your article and it's written well. I'd make the following changes though. The text is hard to read. Left justify it, with more readable font.

    You might want to use the term "online casino" instead of "e-casino".

    Also, if your reviewing a casino like "InterCasino.com" then don't use the word InterCasino.com because your reader may just copy and paste in his browser. If he does that then you'll lose your commission. Use "Inter Casino" instead.

    Good luck!

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    Quote Originally Posted by WagerX View Post
    Also, if your reviewing a casino like "InterCasino.com" then don't use the word InterCasino.com because your reader may just copy and paste in his browser. If he does that then you'll lose your commission. Use "Inter Casino" instead.
    This is a valid point. There also exists browser plugins that enable user to just highlight text from a page, and then right click to Google or go to that page.
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    very thank you.

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    I hope not to be too boring you could to do other feedback :

    http://blog.onlinexcasinos.com/?p=24
    http://blog.onlinexcasinos.com/?p=23


    ( I don't have corrected the old articles ).

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