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    I don't understand :

    the website is second with the keyword "online casinos" in http://search.live.com/results.aspx?...e=&FORM=LIVSOP.


    it obtain about one visitators every 2 days. it is much strange.

    somebody use live.co.uk ?

    is it possible to know the number of search of live.com ?
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    That is very odd. I have just viewed your site and I find it quite difficult to undestand your english plus I would remove that bidvertiser banner unless it is making you alot of money I used to have one of those and they make sites look amateur.
    Jackpot Avenue- www.jackpotavenue.com

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    thank you rob3786

    are you avaible to do one small service of proofreading ?
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    I also find it difficult to read. It just doesn't flow very well.

    Why don't you just create a simply list of the Top 5 online casinos that you recommend and stick that right on the homepage in that top section. People are lazy and don't want to read that much and especially if it's not making much sense.

    Give them a short reason why you think these casinos are the best and see if that helps with conversions.

    Mark

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    I agree with focal
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    help you, here's a possible rewrite of your home page screed. You lose some of those repetitive keywords but, unfortunately, it has to make sense to your visitors as well.

    Note: Screed was removed at help you's request.

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    thank you Ntaus. I have added this.

    but you should do 2 pleasure :

    1) there is not the link to http://www.onlinexcasinos.com/sitemap.html. ( can you write other sentences ? )

    2) Google don't love the content copied on more pages. can you cancell the words that you have written here ( you don't worry I have already reported on website ) ?


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    You're welcome.

    Your sitemap link is in your navigation bar. Everyone has a sitemap so visitors know to look for it - and it's not a good keyword. But if you must have it there:

    Our (link) site map allows easy access to every part of this site.

    Rob 3786 is quite right - you need to get rid of those ads at the top of the page - they are doing nothing for your page. Put them further down the page if you must have them.

    Sorry, but as soon as someone posts under a post it is no longer possible to edit. I don't think having it posted here will hurt you.

    Thank you for the link:http://www.xxxtaketimeout.net Online Casino Gambling Please remove xxx
    ntaus

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    Sorry, but as soon as someone posts under a post it is no longer possible to edit. I don't think having it posted here will hurt you.
    you can cancell, I can edit the past posts.

    you cancell after I'll add the link.
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