need review and advice please

[jeffyfan]

Well the day has come!! Please look and tell me what you think. My bingo page isn't done all the way because the 3 other sites I wanted to post there are doing system updates all day and have been down. I know it needs work but I didn't think I did to bad for a total newbee. Please go to
http://www.gamblingcrazy.biz and tell me what you think.
Thanks
Jonda

[kidd75219]

I tried, but the link was dead.

[Ace Fun]

I found the red lettering difficult to read because I turn the brightness and contrast down on my monitor.

[Pam712]

I fixed the link. Yes I found the colour scheme difficult to read too.

[jeffyfan]

:-? ok putting in color changes Will let you know when I'm done for another review I thought the bright pink was hard to read too but hubby and daughter inlaw liked it lol gonna go with blue my favorite color
jonda
PS thanks for fixing link Pam

[bigbcasinos]

Hi there

I like the way the site loads so quickly, that is a definite plus. I am no great critic though but would suggest a teeny bit of branding i.e. a small logo or something like that.

Questions:
1) I thought Capn Cooks had done away with the free $21?
2) I thought Bingoville was offering $10 and not $15.

I think your site will grow nicely.

SEO

Your Title and description are a bit strange. I think the program you are using has auto assigned some words which won't stand you in good stead with the search engines. Use the SEO toolkit on the GPWA main page and choose the spider view. You will see the effect your blank spaces have on your message to the web. You will also spot a broken Captain Cooks link.

Good luck and go well.

[jeffyfan]

thanks for the input Bingoville has a $15.00 sign on bonus for it's new members. I wrote Captain cooks to find out for sure what their bonus is. I also changed the color. I'm useing GO Daddy which so far has been a pain. I have been working on this non stop for 3 days lol
Any other input???? I need more changes I'm sure.
Jonda

[Pitboss_IGG]

I have been working on this non stop for 3 days

Only 362 more to go then!

[jeffyfan]

:LOL: was so into it I forgot to wake hubby up to got to work lol
Think I'm having a gambling with draw :LOL:
Jonda

[ALEX777]

jeffyfan:>>> Click here

[jeffyfan]

thanks alex!!

[universal4]

The sad thing about that validator is that is doesn't like almost ALL affiliate links, a great tool none the less though.

[jeffyfan]

thanks alex still trying to figure all this out. Found tools on home page to help a lot!!!
Jonda